Star Citizen Paragraphs

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Nib

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#1
I've managed to do them now. I think. I'd appreciate some feedback because I'm not sure if I got it right or not :confused:

Here ya go:



Engineering:
At Infinity ^2 we believe that quality merchandise is the future. Therefore we make sure that what you ordered is what you will get. From us to you, with love.

Logistics:
We care for you as well as our self. The Infinity ^2 cargo ships are safely guarded and travel all around the galaxy. Even to your front door!

Security:
Better safe than sorry. Our specialized security teams are all highly trained to handle any unfortunate events that may transpire during any and all missions. So don’t you worry, with us you are safe.

Office of Affairs:
Cash is king and seeing as our corporation is growing immensely we need more employees. If you feel that you are up for the task feel free to contact us!
 
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Jason

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I would change "Therefore we make sure that what you ordered you will get" (Paragraph 1) to "Therefore we make sure that what you ordered is what you will get". Flows better, I think.
Got no ideas for the last paragraph.

Nicely done though.;)
 

Nib

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I would change "Therefore we make sure that what you ordered you will get" (Paragraph 1) to "Therefore we make sure that what you ordered is what you will get". Flows better, I think.
Got no ideas for the last paragraph.

Nicely done though.;)
Yeah it does. I'll change it.
 

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#7
I might have done them without replying here but I don't remember. So here they are, 2+ years late. :cool:

Engineering:
We are on the forefront of technical solutions, applying it to any and all areas of our corporation so that we can be as modern as our goals are.

Logistics:
We care for you as well as our self. The Infinity ^2 cargo ships are safely guarded and travel all around the galaxy. Even to your front door!

I like this one.

Security:
We'll keep you and your cargo safe from all dangers, be it pirates, raiders, looters or soccer moms, don't worry, we will handle them.

Office of Affairs:
The world stops moving without a working economy and we're the last ones willing to let it stop.
 
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